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-One day, Korra, Mako and Bolin at the air temple island:-
Korra: Hey Bolin, we should go drinking tonight. I heard there was gonna be a dance party downtown!
Bolin: Dance party? Count me in!
Mako: Do I have to go?
Korra: Only if you want
Bolin: Yes, of course you do Mako.
Mako: Urg.
Naga: -licks Mako-
Bolin: See? Even Naga thinks so.
Naga: -wags tail-
Mako: -pets naga-
Mako: Okay girl...I am spoiling you too much
Naga: -whines-
Mako: So where's this party?
Korra: I think it is downtown.
Mako: Urg that smoggy place.
Korra: Apparently everyone our age is gonna be there, and there is this jazz band playing there tonight.
Bolin: Well let's go. We should be able to find it eventually
Korra: Hmm...But I can't really dance well.
Bolin: Don't worry Korra! I've got a few moves I can teach you.
-Tenzin enters-
Tenzin: Korra you better not stay up to late you have practice in the morning
Korra: Master Tenzin, you never let me have fun, If it gets late, I'll just stay over at Mako's and Bolin's place
Tenzin: Fine, you better be back at my house by 9 or else...
Korra: Yay!


-At the City-
Korra: Okay, so...don't you think we should change our clothes at least?
Mako: … How you like it! Whatever. - continues following Bolin- ...Girls and their clothes
Korra: -goes into the nearest shop-

Suddenly, Asami drives up in motorcycle and stops in the other side of the street where the group is

Bolin: Hey Mako, look over there! -Points at Asami- You should go talk to her.
Bolin: -eyebrow waggle-
Korra: -looks at different dresses- Eh, I don't care for dresses but...we ARE dancing...  -picks something randomly and goes into changing rooms-
Mako: No
Asami: -winks at Bolin-
Bolin: -casually smiles back and say to Mako through his teeth- Or am I going to get this one too?
Mako: -Mako twitches- urg fine...I'll see what she's all about -walks towards Asami-
Bolin: -enters the shop where Korra was-
Korra: -comes back outside wearing dress- Okay, I'm finished! Bolin, why don't you get something too? You guys should have some extra money from what we got from winning that last pro-bending match.
Bolin: Alright, Korra. I'll go see. -Walks off and looks around at swanky hats-
Korra: -follows Bolin-
Asami: Hey -hair flip-
Mako: what's your name?
Asami: Asami. And you?
Mako: Mako. Are you a bender?
Asami: No. Are you?
Mako: Yeah. Fire Bender. –Makes a little flame from his finger tip to show it-
Asami: -thinks: why do all of the cute ones have to be benders? Suddenly flips and tries to hit a pressure point to block chi him-
Mako: -dodges- Ugh! What the Hell!
Asami: -tries again to hit a pressure point-
Bolin: Hey Korra, what about this one? -Turns around and flashes a cheesy smile-
Korra: Pfft, if you wanna look like an old man!
Korra: -tosses another fedora to Bolin- Try this one instead
Bolin: Hey, this one looks pretty good!
Mako: - dodges- Woah. Luckily I was on guard or you would have got me there. You work for Amon?
Asami: Yes.
Mako: - firebends at Asami's feet-
Asami: -Does an acrobatic backwards flip to dodge it and runs towards Mako-
Bolin: I'll get this one. I hope Mako hasn't done anything stupid.
Korra: Eh, I doubt that.
Asami: -leaps into the air and jabs Mako in the shoulder making Mako to lose bending on his right arm-
Korra: -walks back outside to see the fight-
Bolin: I knew it!
Korra: Uhm, Mako… We left for like 10 minutes! -Firebends at Asami-
Bolin: I told you, we can't trust him alone Korra.
Asami: Ouch! -Dodges fire-
Bolin: -Begins to earthbend at Asami-
Mako: - watching the chaos unfold while sitting immobile in the floor-
Asami: -dodges Bolin's attack and runs towards Korra and tries to hit her-
Korra: -Korra is trying to bend and dodge Asami's moves but is having a difficult time since her outfit is preventing her from moving freely, finally makes an earth pillar under Asami and launches her away
Asami: -Lands on the ground acrobatically and stands up- Try to catch me...hehe -leaps onto a car-
Bolin: Hey! Get back here! Korra, follow me!  We'll take her motorcycle!
Korra: -grabs Mako and drags him toward Bolin-
Korra: Okay, hold on! This dude's pretty heavy!
Mako: Hey!
Asami: -giggles and jumps from car to car, running away-
Bolin: Wait… Anyone knows how to drive a motorcycle?
Korra: can't be any different from riding a Polar-bear Dog....right?
Mako: You guys are insane, just let her go
Korra: Ugh, fine.
Bolin: -sighs-
Korra: Are you kidding? She just ruined our night.  I hope we aren't late
Mako: Maybe if we run...
Bolin: Or find Naga...
Mako: - picks up Korra bridle style-
Mako: You can't be running in that outfit
Korra: -kicks- Stop! I can walk on my own!
Korra: -starts heating up her hands to burn Mako-
Bolin: Hmm...
Bolin: -looks at the tall buildings around- This way! –Points-
Korra: Can. You. Put. Me. DOWN?!
Mako: - runs with Korra in arms-
Bolin: Hey Korra? Is this the place? -Pointing-
Korra: Bolin, can you tell your stupid brother to PUT ME DOWN?
Korra: -brushed off dress- You're insane.
Korra: -walks away with Bolin-


All 3 enter the party
-Jazz music playing the background-
Mako: wow Korra. You look like a girl today.
Korra: -punches Mako on the arm- S-shut up.
Mako: - laughs, and goes to get drinks-
Una: -walks into party, looks at Bolin, blushes-
Random Drunk Partier: LONG LIF DA ERRBENDERS. YA HEAR ME? *giggles*
BAR MAN: Cactus Juice! Cactus Juice For Everyone!!
Random Drunk Partier: CACTUS JUICE!? *hiccups and takes a swig*
Korra: Cactus Juice? Is that some kind of new Republic City drink?
Bolin: -approaches to Una-
Bolin: Hey there missy, come here often?
Una: Not really. And you? -winks-
Bolin: A few times. -Smiles- Wanna dance?
Una: Sure!
-Both go to the dance floor and start dancing to the slow music-
Korra: -sees Bolin flirting so walks over to Mako-
Random Drunk Partier: -starts singing and giggling-
Mako: - goes to get some drinks, avoids cactus juice and gets mango juice for Korra-  Here Korra
Korra: -glares- I can handle whatever this stuff is! -takes Mango juice anyway-
Random Drunk Partier: -pokes Mako- ARE YOU AN SPARROWKEET?
Mako:-Ignoring the guy and finding a drink for himself while talking to Korra- Don't you dare go near that stuff Korra. You will regret it. - Accidently fills his own with cactus juice-
Korra: Fine, whatever...
Random Drunk Partier: -stabs Mako again with a drink- YOU SURE YOU'RE NOT A SPARROWKEET?
Mako: So...aren't you going to go… dance with people, Korra?
- Slower dancing music starts to play-
Korra: Well, I thought Bolin was gonna show me how to dance, since I don't know Republic City music and stuff too well...
Korra: But I guess he's a bit busy -points toward Una while both Una and Bolin dance at the other side of the bar-
Random Drunk Partier: *pokes Mako* SPARROWKEET!
Mako: Well he's right over there... go ask him. - Turns to the guy who poked him- Do it again and ill cook your face –Firebends a flame in his hand, showing to the drunk guy-
Random Drunk Partier: -gets worried and backs up slowly-
Mako: –Stares back at Korra-
Korra: Forget it, I'll wait.
Mako: okay...- awkward silence - sips juice-
Una: So what's your name?
Bolin: Bolin, and yours?
Una: I'm Una.
Bolin: -accidently steps on her toes-
Una: Ouch! Hey, watch it!
Bolin: Sorry, I'm a little rusty...
Korra: -stares are people dancing and drinks juice as well-
Korra: -sees Bolin mess up- Haha, Mako look! Bolin just stepped on that girls toes.
Mako: - Mako's' breathing becomes heavy, randomly Laughs-
Korra: Uh....are you okay?
Mako: -Stops laughing, stares at Korra- Are YOU fine? - Squints at her-
Korra: I think? -Backs away slightly-
Bolin: -occasionally hears at Mako's laughter and steps on her toes again-
Una: -stops dancing- What's your problem?
Bolin: I don't have a problem, my brother's just being a jerk, I can hear him laughing all the way across the bar. -Disgruntled look-
Mako: You think this. You think that. How about what I think for once. Why does it always have to be about you just  becausEYOUARETHEAVATARDOESNOTMEANYOUGETSPECIALRIGHTSTOEVERYTHINGDAMNIT!
-music sort of stops at Mako's outburst-
Korra: -stares- Uh...what?
Una: -looks over at bar- Is that your brother?
Bolin: -sighs- yeah...
Una: It seems like your brother has drank a bit too much...
Bolin: I'm not surprised. I hope he didn't drink any of that cactus juice again. He has no tolerance for the stuff.
Korra: -sees everyone staring because of sudden music break- Mako, what the hell are you saying now, people are staring!
Mako: Korra...- heavy breathing- -backs Korra into a wall-
Korra: -backs away slightly and hits wall- W-what are you doing?!  -reaches over to a random glass and throws contents at Mako-
-Band puts down their instruments and watch awkwardly-
Una: Should we help her out?
Bolin: Yeah, stay here. -Walks over to Mako, adjusting his hat-
Korra: -sees Bolin walking over- Bolin!! Save me! I have no idea what he's doing!
Mako: - stares at Korra all drenched - (in hushed whisper) Must be nice...being -hic- the avatar. You could never understand me. I grew up with nothing. –Looks at Bolin approaching and storms out of party before Bolin reaches them-
-Band starts playing lighthearted music again-
Bolin: -steps out of Mako's way as he storms out-
Una: -approaches to Bolin- I hope your brother's ok...
Korra: -blinks, staring at Mako going out of the bar- What just happened, Bolin?
Bolin: He didn't drink any cactus juice, did he?
Korra: -grabs Mako's drink- I don't know, did he? -Gives drink to Bolin-
Bolin: -Smells the glass- Yeah, I better go check on him. You can come if you want, but I don't want him to get upset with you again.
Korra: Okay...-sits down at table and just thinks about what happened-
Una: Hey, if you're going, can we at least meet again sometime?
Bolin: Of course we can, babe. I'll be sure to stop by this place again some time. Until then...-kisses on cheek and leaves to find Mako-
Una: -blushes-
Mako: - Kicks a garbage can outside-
Mako: - trips over garbage can and lands on his face- -curses-
Bolin: -Finds Mako outside- Bro, what's the matter with you? You scared Korra half to death!
Mako: Leave me alone -hic-
-Asami suddenly appears from the shadows and hides, watching the scene-
Korra: -still at table- maybe I should go look for them.... -walks outside to the street, trying to look for the brothers-
Bolin: I'm not going to leave you alone. What are you doing drinking cactus juice?
Mako: I DIDNT DRINK CACTUS JUICE! - HIC- I'm...I'm sober.
Bolin: Sure, you are. And you don't like Korra either.
Korra: -Goes out the bar and stops once she hears her name and hides behind bushes-
Asami: -sees Korra hiding nearby and sinks back further-
Mako: ...You wouldn't understand...heh… you… always with so many girls. You don't know what it's like to-hic- find the one. SO DONT TRY AND LECTURE ME ABOUT IT -Hic-
Asami: -whispers to self:-  now I know their weakness, the fire bender loves the avatar
Korra: -confused, ducks down even lower as to make sure she doesn't get caught-
Bolin: You're right Mako. I don't understand. I might get all the girls, sure. But if I'm such a ladies' man, then how come I can never hang on to them?!? -Throws hat into the street-
Mako: -Looks at Bolin confused-
Bolin: You are closer to Korra than I've ever been with any girl...if anything, you don't understand.
Mako: -Looks away and wipes blood off his nose-
Korra: -Korra feels sorta bad about eavesdropping but can't help but listen anyway-
Bolin: Here, let's go find Korra and go home. Tenzin's probably furious already.
Mako: - pukes-
Bolin: Oh man, yeah...let's get you inside. -Pulls Mako's arm over his shoulder and walks him inside, looking for Korra-
Korra: -thinks to herself- Oh ***, they are coming toward me!  -tries to run of inside-
Korra: -Korra is already inside trying to look as nonchalant as possible- H-hey… guys. Back already?
Mako: - avoids eye contact- - randomly passes out, and falls asleep-
Korra: Okay....I guess that means we got to go home now?...
Bolin: Yeah, can you help me carry him?
Korra: *sigh* -walks over and grabs Mako's limp arm-
Suddenly, Asami sneaks up into the bar and tries to attack by surprise the group when suddenly…-
Random partier: Hey, you pretty girl, want some –hic- cactus juice?! –Forces Asami to drink the cactus juice putting the glass bottle on his mouth-
Asami: Leave me! –Takes accidentally a swig. Pushes the guy away and enters in the "Cactus State"- Hehehehe wow! Everything just turns around! –Looks at Mako and says for herself- Come here sweetie! – Sneaks up to Mako and grabs his scarf, the group realizes her action and turns to see her-
Asami: Come and get it, Avatar! BWAHAHA
Korra: -stares at Asami-
Asami: *runs out to the street, dances around*
Bolin: Korra, you take Mako home. -Squints eyes- I'll get his scarf back. -Gives chase-
Korra: Spirits! it's only a damn scarf, Bolin! -loops Mako's arm around her neck trying to carry him and almost trips because of her heels-
Mako: - starts to snore-
Korra: -still trying to drag Mako's limp body- UGH! Why are you so damn heavy?!
Mako: - starts to dream talk- Ko… rra… beau...ti… ful zzzzz -Saying what he really wanted to say to Korra that night-
Korra: -stops short and just looks at Mako, shakes her head and continues dragging Mako- C'mon let's go home –Both go out the bar thought the back door of the bar and leave to Bolin and Mako's apartment-
Outside, in the street…
Asami: Come and get it!  -drunk giggles-
Bolin: -Stomps and creates a wall in front of where Asami is running- I'm sorry Babe, but I can't let you take that. That would be stealing.
Asami: But I want it... –says with a sad face and flips on top on wall and waves around scarf-
Bolin: That doesn't mean you can keep it. -Earthbends, launching himself and landing in front of Asami putting his face close to hers- I'd like it back.
Asami: -hops off the wall and runs towards her motorcycle-
Bolin: Hey! Get back here! –looks at the motorcycle- I see you recovered your motorcycle -Jumps off of the height and slams the ground, flipping her motorcycle and sending it flying-
Bolin: -Walks up to Asami, like swag- Sorry ma'am, but my brother needs that scarf to impress his lady friend.
Asami: But red's my color! It goes so well with my hair! –Says making a puppy dog face- please, can I keep it?
Bolin: Here, I'll cut you a deal. -slowly takes scarf while revealing his leftover shopping money- I'll take this one, mine,  and you can go and buy yourself the prettiest scarf in all of Republic City. -Winks-
Asami: -blushes- Well...okay. But on one condition. You have to come with me.
Bolin: And where is that?
Asami: To buy me a new scarf, stupid! Hehehehehe
Bolin: Hmm… alright, but only if it's quick. I know how long the ladies like to shop.
Asami: Ok cutie. Meet me tomorrow! Bye! -Stumbles in wrong direction, cries like an excited little girl around the street and falls asleep in the floor-
Bolin: Well… -grabs Asami and leaves her in the nearest bench- Time to go!


Korra Finally gets to the apartment after an hour of dragging Mako through the streets
Korra: -throws Mako on his bed and stretches out her arms- This...was exhausting.
Mako: zzzzzzzzzzzzz… heeehehehehehe… zzzzzzzzzzzzzz –laughs while sleeping-
Korra: -pretends to beat up Mako to vent her anger about carrying him so far- Oh, now it's funny! –Says whispering with anger, and relaxes-
Korra: -goes into their small kitchen and takes out a bottle of tea to give to Mako0
Korra: Mako! Wake up!
Mako: - wakes up- urg… my head... ow... I... I was just getting you a drink... why are we home?
Korra: -shoves bottle toward Mako- Drink it. You, drunk stupid.
Mako: More like...hangover -holds his head and drinks the bottle of tea-
Korra: Yeah, so this night was not like how I planned at all... First we got attacked. Then we finally get to the party, but you start acting weird.
Mako: - looking confused to Korra- weird? How so?
Korra: Well, that kind of weird when you say some pretty hurtful stuff when you're drunk.
Mako: ...Urg. - Holds his head- I' sorry for what I could have said…
Korra: Yeah whatever -starts to walk away but trips-
Mako: - swoops her onto the sofa before she falls and lands on top of her-
Korra: -is speechless, but then realizes what is going on- Get OFF me!
Mako: - leans closer, turns his head and rests it on her collar bone- Your so fast
Korra: -Korra chokes a bit on her breath- Uh....Mako...?
Mako: - He gets off her collar bone and before she could object he presses his lips against hers-
Korra: Mph!!! -Freaking out in her head-
Mako: -locks his fingers into hers and holds them above her head still kissing her-
Korra: -thinks for herself that Mako is still drunk, and somehow she realizes that she likes the moment, stops resisting, and closes her eyes-
Bolin: -Finally making it up the last flight of stairs, Bolin wipes the sweat off his forehead and walks to the apartment door and opens it- Hey guys! What's going o-
Korra: -Korra hears Bolin open the door and suddenly shoves Mako off of her-
Mako: Wow! Oh! –Falls on the floor-
Korra: BOLIN! UH, HI.
Mako: - turns to see Bolin, clears throat-
Korra: -hair is messed up and her cheeks are tinted with pink-
Bolin: Hey, is Mako alright? -Scratching the back of his head, Bolin tries to ignore what he thinks he just saw.-
Korra: -stammers- Yeah....he's fine...
Bolin: Ok, let's just let him sleep then. It's too late, you said Tenzin you would sleep here. You don't mind taking the couch do you? We don't have an extra bed. -Chuckles n embarrassment-
Korra: -secretly kicks Mako when Bolin is not looking- Yeah, it's fine, I can sleep here. But where is the bathroom? I need to change.
Bolin: Oh, it's just down there. -Points- I'll get Mako to his room
Korra: Oh, good
Bolin: -As Korra walks towards the bathroom, Bolin looks over at Mako, passed out on the couch; he smiles anxiously, wondering if he had ruined something for his brother...again. He'd find out in the morning
This fanfic was made in about 1 or 2 hours, all is improvisation, it was made in a livestream chat and we were roleplaying and having fun, I copy pasted all the chat log and this is what i got in clean XD Hope you like it.
(The preview picture is from KamisAngel)

The livestream was from KamisAngel and by now all I know about the role players is this:

Kamis Angel

Zuko Sexual


Asumi and Una:
Thestrals and Teakettles

I had a really good time and I died several times laughing XD
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graveyardancing45 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
are you gonna write more?!! i am so gonna watch you now!! *squeals in a unlady like manner!
ElisaAxor Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
I love this!!!
Cactus juice <3
NatsumiEndou Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
ooh so cool more plz? :S
Guipradi Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I could try to write something, but I'm lazy -.- I have written a lot of things since I'm 10 or something. I'll just write a korra fanfic implying feeling s and everything else... yeah, I'll do that. look forward for it ^^
NatsumiEndou Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
jeej you're the best :iconloveloveplz:
4NIA4EVER Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
LOL!!!! Please don't kill me with the laughter!!! I'm crying from laughing so much!!!
kbthepurpledino Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This was hilarious! Made my day! And Bolin... Such the ladies man!
PrincessLuna234 Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I want cactus juice :3
SweetKitty14 Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Student General Artist
So sweet :squee:
CrystalDragonLove Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Cactus juice.... Warning. May cause weird hallucinations.
iLoveMako Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazingly written :D
TheWeridSphinx Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Student Writer
someone got into the cactus juice
drummergirl567 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012
I love this !!!!!!
Gordontastic Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish this were true ;v;
brainysmurf97 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha I love it!
Icicle1penguin Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yaaaaay Cactus Juice! IT'S THE QUENCHIEST! :dummy:
dragonmaiden50 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The cactus juice part had me seriously loling
Guipradi Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I don't think there will be... This was improvised
danimefreack Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
omg can u make a second part for this???
danimefreack Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
anilulover93 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012
Wooooo...the power of the fandom. Really, I love being part of the LoK fandom ;)
EternalFusion Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
LMAO! xD good stuff to keep on record~~
And indeed I was Kamis
PencilPaperPassion Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol, Mako was btw :)

Thanks for cleaning this up, oh god, we are so crazy.
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